Listening to my feedback, I recorded at a quieter time to reduce background noise, and I tried to show a little more emotion. I did find that I felt more comfortable this time compared to the last two times when I felt much more awkward in front of the camera, and I think the pitch has come a long way since the beginning.
Friday, November 9, 2018
22A Elevator Pitch No. 3
Listening to my feedback, I recorded at a quieter time to reduce background noise, and I tried to show a little more emotion. I did find that I felt more comfortable this time compared to the last two times when I felt much more awkward in front of the camera, and I think the pitch has come a long way since the beginning.
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It's pretty amazing how much more comfortable you become with the camera with practice. You seem to be more comfortable with the camera and to speak with passion for your product. I think as we learn more, we are able to be more concise and more eloquent with the conversation we have about our projects. You definitely took feed back an adjusted.
ReplyDeleteShowing growth in your market at the beginning no doubts attracts those who listen to continue to find a way into your idea. You seem a lot more relaxed and comfortable than your previous attempts and were very fluent in your delivery. It delivered the statistics to attract us and also you did not overbear us with a long and boring pitch.
ReplyDeleteHey Jack,
ReplyDeleteIt's great for us to see that you've shown increasing comfort with each time out in front of the camera. That being said, you've also done a great job of taking the feedback you received into account when making this rendition for your sales pitch, so kudos for that. One thing I would recommend doing is dressing a little more formally to give off a great impression to potential consumers.